The page reference for Laurence is p. 126.
The arrow between Michael and Yves should point only to Yves, not to both.
The Resonance for Kyriotates is Multiplicity, not Honor.
The Song of Attraction's durations are in hours.
The Song of Charm has a range of skill + Essence.
The Song of Dreams' durations are in minutes.
The Songs of Entropy and Form have Corporeal, Ethereal, and Celestial versions; their range, duration, and disturbance don't vary, however.
The range of the Song of Form is the singer, not contact.
P. 9. The Pedrozas were coming to visit their grandson, so Carlos is afraid for "the lives of his grandson and his family."
Pp. 27, 31. Replace "Lying/6" with "Lockpicking/6" in Huzrael's Skills, and "Captain of Sneaks" with "Captain of Corsairs" in his Attunements & Distinctions.